Extended Practice Brief #4: *Team feedback for the brochure Design Development

Feedback from group about brochure design:

• Take out less important bits of the paragraph as it's too long.
• Keep the paragraph alignment rigid e.g. left aligned as the flowy design seems too chaotic and takes the attention away from the images. Also quite eligible (some words are cut out hard to follow when read)
• Make the crop images cleaner 
• Put the 'Laws of 2100' at the back page instead as it looks out of place at the moment. 
• Yellow Stock looks more inviting that pale blue stock, so maybe use the orange stock for final instead??

Thoughts & Reflection:

From the feedback, I am going to change the design in order for it to be sleeker and more fitting to our intentions and aesthetic as an agency.